Wednesday, July 13, 2011

A Living Social Boat Ride

There once was a family looking for fun

A boat ride" mom said to everyone!

Everyone clapped and quickly agreed,

A great deal obtained through Living Social by me.

The family was all ready to go

With grandma and grandpa also in tow.

We slowly backed away from the dock

A cellphone, drinks and snacks in stock.

We cruised around the harbor hardly making a wake,

5 mph was all this boat could take.

The kids all took turns one,
Two,

Three,
Everyone was so happy, including me

But then a sputter, a cough and some smoke

This was not funny- it wasn't a joke!

We shut off the engine, we did it quick.

How did we get this boat? What an awful pick.

Without oars or paddles we were just a floating duck.

We bumped into a wall and a boat-what bad luck!

A call was made- eventually rescue came

We were towed back to dock, oh the shame!
They said they were sorry and gave us our coupon back

And said come again- yea we'll see about that.

16 comments:

  1. Oh wow, you got stuck?? How awful! I'm glad you reached shore safe and sound!

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  2. Haha, loved your little poem. How sad, though!

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  3. I LOVE LOVE Alex's face!!! Hahaha! Priceless. SO sorry you got stuck.

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  4. LOL, you made me laugh with your sorry excursion!

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  5. this why i never get on boats and leave the shore..scary

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  6. Next time check your Happenings Book for a boat rental place. I think they have everything in that book.

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  7. But I bet the kids had a blast anyway, right?

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  8. Oh my gosh! That was the best poem ever!!

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  9. Oh no, oh no...
    It cannot be...
    A boat ride from heck,
    And with little ones, three!

    I'm sorry it broke down,
    I'm sure you were stunned.
    So give them back the coupon,
    and ask for a refund!

    :)

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  10. Oh my goodness that is so awful...but hilarious the way you put it into a poem!

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  11. Hahaha:) You are a great poet:) Loved the poem but sorry about your "bumpy" boat ride. Sounded like a great idea though:)

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  12. Your poem is so cute!! I love the pictures to go along with it. Ryder looks so happy!

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  13. I hope you still had fun even with the brake down.

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  14. Love: the poem, the pictures, the story!

    Don't love: you got stuck!

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  15. Love: the poem, the pictures, the story!

    Don't love: you got stuck!

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  16. Your poem makes it a little less sad :)

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